2006/ws/policy ws-policy-attachment.html,1.8,1.9 ws-policy-attachment.xml,1.5,1.6

Update of /sources/public/2006/ws/policy
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv8754

Modified Files:
	ws-policy-attachment.html ws-policy-attachment.xml 
Log Message:
Completed action items
                             Editors to remove extraneous namespace decl in the example at the end of section 3.4 <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2006/07/12-ws-policy-minutes.html#action18">18</loc>,
                             RFC2606 for domain names <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2006/07/12-ws-policy-minutes.html#action09">09</loc> (note: PLH had already done but it didn't show up in the change log)  
                             editors to straighten up Note after example 3-1 <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2006/07/12-ws-policy-minutes.html#action11">11</loc>
                             editors to align termdef with other w3c style <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2006/07/12-ws-policy-minutes.html#action06">06</loc> (done by moving element policy definition to terminology section, no other termdefs)


Index: ws-policy-attachment.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- ws-policy-attachment.xml	13 Jul 2006 17:24:25 -0000	1.5
+++ ws-policy-attachment.xml	18 Jul 2006 08:02:33 -0000	1.6
@@ -288,6 +288,12 @@
 attached to <termref def='policy_scope'>policy scopes</termref> that
 contain the policy subject.</termdef></p>
 
+<p><termdef id='element_policy' term='element policy'>The
+	<term>element policy</term> is the <termref
+	def='policy'>policy</termref> attached to the <termref
+	def='policy_subject'>policy subjects</termref> associated with
+	the element information item that contains it.</termdef></p>
+
 </div2>
       <div2 id='Example'>
 	<head>Example</head>
@@ -439,11 +445,7 @@
 	ref='AttachingPolicyUsingWSDL1.1'/> for the specific details
 	of WSDL attachment).</p>
 	
-	<p><termdef id='element_policy' term='element policy'>The
-	<term>element policy</term> is the <termref
-	def='policy'>policy</termref> attached to the <termref
-	def='policy_subject'>policy subjects</termref> associated with
-	the element information item that contains it.</termdef> The precise
+	<p>The precise
 	semantics of how element policy is to be processed once
 	discovered is domain-specific; however, implementations are
 	likely to follow the precedent specified in the section below
@@ -502,7 +504,7 @@
 (14)   &lt;/sp:AsymmetricBinding&gt;
 (15) &lt;/wsp:Policy&gt;</eg>
 </example>
-<p>Note that the <termref def='element_policy'>element policy</termref> has no meaningful URI.</p>
+<p>Note that this <termref def='element_policy'>element policy</termref> has no meaningful URI.</p>
 <p>The presence of the <att>wsp:PolicyURIs</att> attribute does not
 prohibit implementations from using additional mechanisms for
 associating <termref def='policy_expression'>policy expressions</termref> with XML-based constructs.</p>
@@ -622,7 +624,7 @@
 in Web Services Addressing [<bibref ref='WS-Addressing'/>]:</p>
 <eg xml:space="preserve">&lt;wsp:PolicyAttachment&gt;
   &lt;wsp:AppliesTo&gt;
-    &lt;wsa:EndpointReference xmlns:fm="&hellip;" &gt;
+    &lt;wsa:EndpointReference&gt;
       &lt;wsa:Address&gt;http://www.example.com/acct&lt;/wsa:Address&gt;
     &lt;/wsa:EndpointReference&gt;
   &lt;/wsp:AppliesTo&gt;

Index: ws-policy-attachment.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.html,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -d -r1.8 -r1.9
--- ws-policy-attachment.html	13 Jul 2006 18:14:32 -0000	1.8
+++ ws-policy-attachment.html	18 Jul 2006 08:02:33 -0000	1.9
@@ -279,6 +279,10 @@
 attached to <a title="policy scope" href="#policy_scope">policy scopes</a> that
 contain the policy subject.]</p>
 
+<p>[<a name="element_policy" title="element policy">Definition</a>: The
+	<b>element policy</b> is the <a title="policy" href="#policy">policy</a> attached to the <a title="policy subject" href="#policy_subject">policy subjects</a> associated with
+	the element information item that contains it.]</p>
+
 </div>
       <div class="div2">
 	
@@ -426,9 +430,7 @@
 	Framework (see Section <a href="#AttachingPolicyUsingWSDL1.1"><b>4. Attaching Policies Using WSDL 1.1</b></a> for the specific details
 	of WSDL attachment).</p>
 	
-	<p>[<a name="element_policy" title="element policy">Definition</a>: The
-	<b>element policy</b> is the <a title="policy" href="#policy">policy</a> attached to the <a title="policy subject" href="#policy_subject">policy subjects</a> associated with
-	the element information item that contains it.] The precise
+	<p>The precise
 	semantics of how element policy is to be processed once
 	discovered is domain-specific; however, implementations are
 	likely to follow the precedent specified in the section below
@@ -487,7 +489,7 @@
 (14)&nbsp; &nbsp;&lt;/sp:AsymmetricBinding&gt;
 (15) &lt;/wsp:Policy&gt;</pre></div>
 </div>
-<p>Note that the <a title="element policy" href="#element_policy">element policy</a> has no meaningful URI.</p>
+<p>Note that this <a title="element policy" href="#element_policy">element policy</a> has no meaningful URI.</p>
 <p>The presence of the <code class="attr">wsp:PolicyURIs</code>  attribute does not
 prohibit implementations from using additional mechanisms for
 associating <a title="policy expression" href="#policy_expression">policy expressions</a> with XML-based constructs.</p>
@@ -608,7 +610,7 @@
 in Web Services Addressing [<cite><a href="#WS-Addressing">WS-Addressing Core</a></cite>]:</p>
 <div class="exampleInner"><pre>&lt;wsp:PolicyAttachment&gt;
 &nbsp; &lt;wsp:AppliesTo&gt;
-&nbsp; &nbsp; &lt;wsa:EndpointReference xmlns:fm="&hellip;" &gt;
+&nbsp; &nbsp; &lt;wsa:EndpointReference&gt;
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &lt;wsa:Address&gt;http://www.example.com/acct&lt;/wsa:Address&gt;
 &nbsp; &nbsp; &lt;/wsa:EndpointReference&gt;
 &nbsp; &lt;/wsp:AppliesTo&gt;

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