editorial: part 2 section 2 beginning from Jacek Kopecky on 2005-09-24 (public-ws-desc-comments@w3.org from September 2005)

From: Jacek Kopecky <jacek.kopecky@deri.org>
Date: Sat, 24 Sep 2005 17:54:38 +0200
To: public-ws-desc-comments@w3.org
Message-Id: <1127577278.4383.2.camel@Kalb>

Hi all,

just an editorial comment - I find the current beginning of section 2 of
part 2 (Predefined Message Exchange Patterns) kinda nasty - introducing
the term node before any introductory text that even mentions "message
exchange".

I think it would help if the introduction of the section was
reformulated.

Jacek

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