- From: David Hull <dmh@tibco.com>
- Date: Mon, 25 Jul 2005 16:27:54 -0400
- To: "public-ws-addressing@w3.org" <public-ws-addressing@w3.org>
- Message-id: <42E54B4A.2090204@tibco.com>
As with the core issues I sent, none of these is a showstopper. * The boilerplate in section 1.1 is out of sync with the core. In particular, there is no "for brevity we leave out open content stuff" disclaimer. * The names we give for the SOAP feature and module, "http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/addressing/feature" and "http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/addressing/module" are SOAP-centric. Other IRIs of this form are generic, but these aren't generic. They might be better named "http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/addressing//SOAP-/feature" and "http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/addressing//SOAP-/module". * In section 3.4, we still mention xs: explicitly, in "whose value is a valid xs:boolean representaion of "true"". Just what constitutes a valid representation presumably varies, so this might better read "whose value is a valid xs:boolean representation of "true"." (representation was also misspelt). * In the discussion of faults before section 5.1, "The English language reason element, use of the specified fault code is RECOMMENDED but alternate text MAY be used." I think we mean "The English language reason element. Use of the specified fault code /reason /is RECOMMENDED but alternate text MAY be used." This is also one of several places where a comma should be replaced by a period (full list available if anyone cares) * In section 5.3.4, describing "Problem Action", it seems clearer to change "An optional element that provides the [action] that caused the problem." to "An optional element that provides the [action] /of the message /that caused the problem." and likewise for wsa:SoapAction. In the case of a mismatch, you can't really say which one caused the problem. * In section 6, we now have two predefined IRIs, so "Messages that use wsa:ReplyTo or wsa:FaultTo headers whose [address] is not the predefined anonymous URI [...]" should read "Messages that use wsa:ReplyTo or wsa:FaultTo headers whose [address] is not the /one of the IRIs /predefined /in section 2.1 of the WSA Core specification."/ or words to that effect.
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