- From: David Hull <dmh@tibco.com>
- Date: Mon, 25 Jul 2005 16:27:54 -0400
- To: "public-ws-addressing@w3.org" <public-ws-addressing@w3.org>
- Message-id: <42E54B4A.2090204@tibco.com>
As with the core issues I sent, none of these is a showstopper.
* The boilerplate in section 1.1 is out of sync with the core. In
particular, there is no "for brevity we leave out open content
stuff" disclaimer.
* The names we give for the SOAP feature and module,
"http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/addressing/feature" and
"http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/addressing/module" are SOAP-centric.
Other IRIs of this form are generic, but these aren't generic.
They might be better named
"http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/addressing//SOAP-/feature" and
"http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/addressing//SOAP-/module".
* In section 3.4, we still mention xs: explicitly, in "whose value
is a valid xs:boolean representaion of "true"". Just what
constitutes a valid representation presumably varies, so this
might better read "whose value is a valid xs:boolean
representation of "true"." (representation was also misspelt).
* In the discussion of faults before section 5.1, "The English
language reason element, use of the specified fault code is
RECOMMENDED but alternate text MAY be used." I think we mean "The
English language reason element. Use of the specified fault code
/reason /is RECOMMENDED but alternate text MAY be used." This is
also one of several places where a comma should be replaced by a
period (full list available if anyone cares)
* In section 5.3.4, describing "Problem Action", it seems clearer to
change "An optional element that provides the [action] that caused
the problem." to "An optional element that provides the [action]
/of the message /that caused the problem." and likewise for
wsa:SoapAction. In the case of a mismatch, you can't really say
which one caused the problem.
* In section 6, we now have two predefined IRIs, so "Messages that
use wsa:ReplyTo or wsa:FaultTo headers whose [address] is not the
predefined anonymous URI [...]" should read "Messages that use
wsa:ReplyTo or wsa:FaultTo headers whose [address] is not the /one
of the IRIs /predefined /in section 2.1 of the WSA Core
specification."/ or words to that effect.
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