- From: David Hull <dmh@tibco.com>
- Date: Mon, 25 Jul 2005 15:28:23 -0400
- To: "public-ws-addressing@w3.org" <public-ws-addressing@w3.org>
- Message-id: <42E53D57.2060603@tibco.com>
None of the following is a showstopper for CR but ... There is one LC resolution not reflected in the text * The text in section 4.1 regarding combining [message id] with something else that isn't unique either is still missing the "In such cases" qualifier agreed on in the resolution of LC90. Things which stand out mainly because the rest of the text reads quite well: * In the introduction, the text "Web Services Addressing 1.0 - Core (WS-Addressing) defines two constructs, message addressing properties and endpoint references [...]" might be better with "endpoint references" first, since we define them first. * In section 1.1, "Pseudo schemas do not include extensibility points for brevity." might be better as "/For brevity,/ /p/seudo schemas do not include extensibility points for brevity." (The first version leads me to wonder whether they might include extensibility points for other reasons). * In section 1.1, "ocurrances" should be spelt "occurrences". * In the description of [reference parameters] in section 2.1, do we mean "Reference parameters are namespace-qualified element information items that are required to properly interact with the endpoint." (reference parameters must interact properly) or "Reference parameters are namespace-qualified element information items that are required /in order /to properly interact with the endpoint." (they enable proper interaction)? * In section 3.1, we describe the related message id in the [relationship] by "The related message is identified by an absolute IRI that corresponds to the related message's [message id] property." I believe we mean "The related message is identified by an absolute IRI that corresponds to the related message's [message id] property." (i.e., the [message id] itself, not an IRI that corresponds to it). * In the description of wsa:RelatesTo in section 3.2, "/Each occurrence of t/This OPTIONAL (repeating) element information item contributes one abstract [relationship] property value, in the form of an (IRI, IRI) pair." might read better.
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