Re: RESTful Design for Internet of Things Systems -draft

It looks like there should be a description of the Forward Proxy between Figure 1 and Figure 2.

Michael

On Oct 21, 2015, at 7:32 AM, Charpenay, Victor (ext) <victor.charpenay@siemens.com> wrote:

> Hi Ari,
> 
> I have two remarks about your draft:
> 
> - the positioning of the figures in part 3.1 is not very clear. Fig. 1 and 2 both refer to the first paragraph but come after the second paragraph (which could be maybe merged with the last paragraph, by the way). 
> 
> - the features of REST architectures are well presented. However, most of it is not specific to the IoT. It is maybe on purpose, but it is not what I was expecting when I started to read the document. It might be worth extending a bit the part about "servients" and its impact in the system design for instance (part 3.2). Also, examples of Thing resources (e.g. a sensor measurement or a parameter) or categories of Thing resources would be worthwhile in part 3.3. What do you think?
> 
> Regards,
> Victor
> 
> -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----
> Von: Ari Keränen [mailto:ari.keranen@ericsson.com] 
> Gesendet: Montag, 19. Oktober 2015 23:58
> An: Public Web of Things IG
> Betreff: RESTful Design for Internet of Things Systems -draft
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> This new IRTF Thing-to-Thing Research Group draft might be of interest to you too:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-keranen-t2trg-rest-iot-00
> 
> Comments and questions are very welcome!
> 
> 
> Cheers,
> Ari
> 
>> Begin forwarded message:
>> 
>> From: Ari Keränen <ari.keranen@ericsson.com>
>> Subject: Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-keranen-t2trg-rest-iot-00.txt
>> Date: 20 Oct 2015 00:52:50 EEST
>> To: "T2TRG@irtf.org" <T2TRG@irtf.org>
>> Cc: Matthias Kovatsch <kovatsch@inf.ethz.ch>, Klaus Hartke <hartke@tzi.org>
>> 
>> Folks,
>> 
>> As discussed in the Prague T2TRG meeting, we have now written a first version of a draft about guidance for designing RESTful IoT systems:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-keranen-t2trg-rest-iot-00
>> 
>> The goal of the document is to give basic and practical guidance for engineers designing such systems. There are many snippets of text from various sources and pointers for more information, all with IoT scenarios in mind.
>> 
>> Your comments and questions are very welcome and we look forward to discussing this in more detail at the Yokohama T2TRG sessions.
>> 
>> 
>> Cheers,
>> Ari
>> 
>>> Begin forwarded message:
>>> 
>>> From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
>>> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-keranen-t2trg-rest-iot-00.txt
>>> Date: 19 Oct 2015 23:05:01 EEST
>>> To: Klaus Hartke <hartke@tzi.org>, Matthias Kovatsch <kovatsch@inf.ethz.ch>, Ari Keranen <ari.keranen@ericsson.com>
>>> 
>>> 
>>> A new version of I-D, draft-keranen-t2trg-rest-iot-00.txt
>>> has been successfully submitted by Ari Keranen and posted to the
>>> IETF repository.
>>> 
>>> Name:		draft-keranen-t2trg-rest-iot
>>> Revision:	00
>>> Title:		RESTful Design for Internet of Things Systems
>>> Document date:	2015-10-19
>>> Group:		Individual Submission
>>> Pages:		13
>>> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-keranen-t2trg-rest-iot-00.txt
>>> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-keranen-t2trg-rest-iot/
>>> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-keranen-t2trg-rest-iot-00
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Abstract:
>>> This document gives guidance for designing Internet of Things (IoT)
>>> systems that follow the principles of the Representational State
>>> Transfer (REST) architectural style.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
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>

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