- From: Ryoichi \ <roy.kawada@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 20:46:52 +0900
- To: 羽田野太巳 <futomi.hatano@newphoria.co.jp>, Sangwhan Moon <sangwhan@iki.fi>
- Cc: "<public-websignage@w3.org>" <public-websignage@w3.org>
Hi Futomi, I have noticed a few "typo" issues: [Basic media profile document][Storage profile document] (contain the same typo errors) 1 Introduction ...Basically, web-based signage is based on the core profile (this document)... "(this document)" should be deleted. 2 Scope and terminology (Second paragraph) ...Basically, web-based signage is based on the core profile (this document)... "(this document)" should be deleted. Cheers, Roy On 2015/11/20 18:13, 羽田野太巳 wrote: > 2015-11-20 16:35 GMT+09:00 Sangwhan Moon <sangwhan@iki.fi > <mailto:sangwhan@iki.fi>>: > > > > On Nov 20, 2015, at 4:12 PM, 羽田野太巳 > <futomi.hatano@newphoria.co.jp > <mailto:futomi.hatano@newphoria.co.jp>> wrote: > >> Hi all, >> >> As we decided at the group meeting at TPAC 2015, we accepted the >> request of liaison from ITU-T SG-16. >> >> As you know, we have drafted 4 documents: >> >> (1) Web-based Signage Use cases and Requirements >> https://www.w3.org/community/websignage/wiki/Web-based_Signage_Use_cases_and_Requirements >> >> (2) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player - >> Core Profile >> https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Core_Profile/master/index.html >> >> (3) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player - >> Basic Media Profile >> https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Basic_Media_Profile/master/index.html >> >> (4) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player - >> Storage Profile >> https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Storage_Profile/master/index.html >> >> We have to publish these drafts as final drafts so that ITU-T >> SG-16 refers our document. >> >> (1) is on the wiki. the draft has to be a HTML document in order >> to publish as a final report. So, I prepared a HTML version of the >> draft. >> https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Use_cases_and_Requirements/master/index.html >> >> Now, all drafts are HTML documents. >> >> If you all don't deny to publish these drafts as final reports, >> I'd like to publish them as final reports as soon as possible. >> I'd like to hear your opinions. I'll wait about for a month. > > I don't have any objections wrt publishing, but I think these > documents need to be throughly proofread before we publish them. The > wording and grammar could use some polish before we push it out. > > > Thank you for your comment. > You are right. > I'll check them again too. > > I'm swamped with other stuff so I can't volunteer at the moment, but > maybe in two weeks I can go through the text and brush it up a bit. > (Speaking of which, I need to do that for the charter as well...) > > > Thank you for your corporation. > > (The UcR document says "rport" instead of "report", for example.) > > > Oh... > I'll correct it as soon as possible. > > Cheers, > Futomi > > Sangwhan > > -- ------------------------------------ Ryoichi "Roy" Kawada, Dr.Eng. W3C Fellow from KDDI Senior Researcher Keio Research Institute at SFC Phone: +81 3 3516 2504 Fax: +81 3 3516 0617 Mobile: +81 80 5943 9606 E-mail: kawada@sfc.keio.ac.jp roy.kawada@w3.org -------------------------------------
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