Re: Updating our Draft Rports to Final Reports

On Fri, 20 Nov 2015 20:46:52 +0900
"Ryoichi \"Roy\" Kawada" <roy.kawada@w3.org> wrote:

> Hi Futomi,
> 
> I have noticed a few "typo" issues:
> 
> [Basic media profile document][Storage profile document]
> (contain the same typo errors)
> 
> 1 Introduction
> ...Basically, web-based signage is based on the core profile (this
> document)...
> 
> "(this document)" should be deleted.
> 
> 2 Scope and terminology
> (Second paragraph)
> ...Basically, web-based signage is based on the core profile (this
> document)...
> 
> "(this document)" should be deleted.

Fixed.
Thank you, Roy.

Futomi


> Cheers,
> Roy
> 
> 
> 
> On 2015/11/20 18:13, 羽田野太巳 wrote:
> > 2015-11-20 16:35 GMT+09:00 Sangwhan Moon <sangwhan@iki.fi 
> > <mailto:sangwhan@iki.fi>>:
> > 
> > 
> > 
> >     On Nov 20, 2015, at 4:12 PM, 羽田野太巳
> >     <futomi.hatano@newphoria.co.jp
> >     <mailto:futomi.hatano@newphoria.co.jp>> wrote:
> > 
> >>     Hi all,
> >>
> >>     As we decided at the group meeting at TPAC 2015, we accepted the
> >>     request of liaison from ITU-T SG-16.
> >>
> >>     As you know, we have drafted 4 documents:
> >>
> >>     (1) Web-based Signage Use cases and Requirements
> >>     https://www.w3.org/community/websignage/wiki/Web-based_Signage_Use_cases_and_Requirements
> >>
> >>     (2) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player -
> >>     Core Profile
> >>     https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Core_Profile/master/index.html
> >>
> >>     (3) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player -
> >>     Basic Media Profile
> >>     https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Basic_Media_Profile/master/index.html
> >>
> >>     (4) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player -
> >>     Storage Profile
> >>     https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Storage_Profile/master/index.html
> >>
> >>     We have to publish these drafts as final drafts so that ITU-T
> >>     SG-16 refers our document.
> >>
> >>     (1) is on the wiki. the draft has to be a HTML document in order
> >>     to publish as a final report. So, I prepared a HTML version of the
> >>     draft.
> >>     https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Use_cases_and_Requirements/master/index.html
> >>
> >>     Now, all drafts are HTML documents.
> >>
> >>     If you all don't deny to publish these drafts as final reports,
> >>     I'd like to publish them as final reports as soon as possible.
> >>     I'd like to hear your opinions. I'll wait about for a month.
> > 
> >     I don't have any objections wrt publishing, but I think these
> >     documents need to be throughly proofread before we publish them. The
> >     wording and grammar could use some polish before we push it out.
> > 
> > 
> > Thank you for your comment.
> > You are right.
> > I'll check them again too.
> > 
> >     I'm swamped with other stuff so I can't volunteer at the moment, but
> >     maybe in two weeks I can go through the text and brush it up a bit.
> >     (Speaking of which, I need to do that for the charter as well...)
> > 
> > 
> > Thank you  for your corporation.
> > 
> >     (The UcR document says "rport" instead of "report", for example.)
> > 
> > 
> > Oh...
> > I'll correct it as soon as possible.
> > 
> > Cheers,
> > Futomi
> > 
> >     Sangwhan
> > 
> > 
> 
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