Re: Updating our Draft Rports to Final Reports

2015-11-20 16:35 GMT+09:00 Sangwhan Moon <sangwhan@iki.fi>:

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> On Nov 20, 2015, at 4:12 PM, 羽田野太巳 <futomi.hatano@newphoria.co.jp> wrote:
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> Hi all,
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> As we decided at the group meeting at TPAC 2015, we accepted the request
> of liaison from ITU-T SG-16.
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> As you know, we have drafted 4 documents:
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> (1) Web-based Signage Use cases and Requirements
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> https://www.w3.org/community/websignage/wiki/Web-based_Signage_Use_cases_and_Requirements
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> (2) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player - Core
> Profile
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> https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Core_Profile/master/index.html
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> (3) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player - Basic
> Media Profile
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> https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Basic_Media_Profile/master/index.html
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> (4) Architecture and Requirements for Web-based Signage Player - Storage
> Profile
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> https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Player_Storage_Profile/master/index.html
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> We have to publish these drafts as final drafts so that ITU-T SG-16 refers
> our document.
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> (1) is on the wiki. the draft has to be a HTML document in order to
> publish as a final report. So, I prepared a HTML version of the draft.
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> https://rawgit.com/futomi/Web-based_Signage_Use_cases_and_Requirements/master/index.html
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> Now, all drafts are HTML documents.
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> If you all don't deny to publish these drafts as final reports, I'd like
> to publish them as final reports as soon as possible.
> I'd like to hear your opinions. I'll wait about for a month.
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> I don't have any objections wrt publishing, but I think these documents
> need to be throughly proofread before we publish them. The wording and
> grammar could use some polish before we push it out.
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Thank you for your comment.
You are right.
I'll check them again too.

I'm swamped with other stuff so I can't volunteer at the moment, but maybe
> in two weeks I can go through the text and brush it up a bit. (Speaking of
> which, I need to do that for the charter as well...)
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Thank you  for your corporation.


> (The UcR document says "rport" instead of "report", for example.)
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Oh...
I'll correct it as soon as possible.

Cheers,
Futomi


> Sangwhan
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