Re: Replacing default welcome email. Was: Onboarding new members

I can do Chinese, if so.
> On Jul 26, 2014, at 06:40, Eliot Graff <Eliot.Graff@microsoft.com> wrote:
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> Thanks for the vote of confidence. I’ll see what I can do over the weekend.
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> From: Julee Burdekin [mailto:julee@adobe.com] 
> Sent: Friday, July 25, 2014 3:12 PM
> To: Amelia Bellamy-Royds; Renoir Boulanger; WebPlatform Public List
> Cc: Jen Simmons
> Subject: Re: Replacing default welcome email. Was: Onboarding new members
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> Hi, Amelia: If Eliot can’t do a quick edit on these templates, I can take a stab. Eliot does magic. I’d probably find a typo or two. ;-) J
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> Julee Burdekin
> Content Strategist
> Adobe Web Platform
> @adobejulee
> julee@adobe.com
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> From: Amelia Bellamy-Royds <amelia.bellamy.royds@gmail.com>
> Date: Friday, July 25, 2014 at 11:19 AM
> To: Renoir Boulanger <renoir@w3.org>, WebPlatform Public List <public-webplatform@w3.org>
> Cc: julee <julee@adobe.com>, Jen Simmons <jen@jensimmons.com>
> Subject: Re: Replacing default welcome email. Was: Onboarding new members
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> That's just what I wanted to see, Renoir.  So we have control over both
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> (a) the content of the confirmation email [1]
> (b) the page that displays after the user confirms the email [2], which appears to be the same server template that is used to generate the page that displays each time a user logs in or changes their password.
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> And both can be localized to different languages.
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> At this point, it's probably easiest to just focus on how we want the welcome to appear with the new single sign-on system, and not worry about changing the existing Mediawiki sign-on.  
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> Everyone else:  Can we get feedback about the following proposed texts so that Renoir can start integrating them into the new system (and we can start finding volunteers to translate)?
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> For the confirmation email, I would suggest adapting the current email [3], adjusting for the fact that the Firefox system doesn't have a cancel link (doing nothing will cancel registration): 
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> ******
> Hello {USERNAME}!
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> Someone, probably you, has registered an account on WebPlatform Docs with email {{USER EMAIL}}.  
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> To confirm that this account really does belong to you, and to complete registration, please open this link in your browser:
> {{CONFIRM LINK}}
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> If you did *not* register the account, simply ignore this email.
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> For more information about the WebPlatform Docs project, visit http://www.webplatform.org/
> ******
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> For the welcome page that displays after someone has confirmed their account, my proposal was:
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> ******
> Welcome {{USERNAME}}!  You have successfully created your account with WebPlatform Docs.  We're delighted to have you on board.
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> To view your profile or change your preferences, select your user name from the top menu bar.
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> To find out how best to contribute to the project, read the [[WPD:Contributors_Guide | Contributor's Guide]].  You can always reach that page by selecting "CONTRIBUTE" from the navigation options at the top of the page.
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> You've already done Step 1, Create an Account.  Now it's time to introduce yourself on the group email list and start making changes!  
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> If you do find a bug or problem that you can't fix yourself, you can file a report on the [http://project.webplatform.org/  Project Issue Tracker]; you can always reach that page by selecting "ISSUES" from the top navigation.  Be aware that you currently need to set up a separate account to use that system; please use the same user name, so that we can connect the two accounts in the future.
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> Any further questions?  Difficulties logging in?  There might be someone on the [[WPD:Community#Chat_with_us_on_IRC | #webplatform IRC channel]] who can help.
> ******
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> Since the same template is also used when users log-in or reset their password, I think most of the content should be re-used in those situations, as a reminder.  We would need to swap out the first paragraph and the next steps statement (which I've separated out as paragraph 4) should only display during sign-up confirmation.
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> And of course, the warning about the separate sign-on for the project tracker should hopefully become obsolete in the not-too-distant future.
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> Proposed text for the first paragraph after a log-in:
> ******
> Welcome back {{USERNAME}}!  You have successfully logged in to WebPlatform Docs.
> ******
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> Proposed text for the first paragraph after a password reset:
> ******
> Welcome back {{USERNAME}}!  Your WebPlatform Docs password has been reset successfully.
> ******
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> Opinions?  Objections?  Volunteers to translate?
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> AmeliaBR
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> [1]: https://github.com/webplatform/fxa-content-server/blob/webplatform-customizations/server/templates/email/verify.html
> [2]: https://github.com/webplatform/fxa-content-server/blob/webplatform-customizations/app/scripts/templates/ready.mustache
> [3]: http://docs.webplatform.org/wiki/MediaWiki:Confirmemail_body