Re: Suggested Revisions to Introduction to Web Payments Charter

On 1/13/14 2:14 PM, Joseph Potvin wrote:
> Ditto now for edits made to the "Goals" section of the WP-CG Charter:
> http://www.w3.org/community/webpayments/wiki/WebPaymentsCommunityGroupCharterProposal#Goals

Joseph, your edit (possibly accidentally) *erased* a specific small 
change that Manu had just made to the Goals, (in the edit just before 
your first one, Manu's being "Revision as of 02:53, 13 January 2014"). 
I had requested this change and I still feel strongly that it needs to 
be included.

Again, the requested edit (which Manu agreed to and made) is to change 
this phrase:
"...allow people on the Web to send each other money..."
To:
"allow [both individual people and organizations] on the Web to send 
each other money..."

I think this is a core goal and it's not made explicit anywhere else 
in the Charter that I know of, although I have yet to read your other 
edits.

If you removed this accidentally, could it be included again please 
(and preferentially also in the main page Introduction, which uses the 
same "people on the Web" words).

If OTOH its removal was purposeful, could you explain your reasoning?

Thanks

Steven Rowat