- From: Steven Rowat <steven_rowat@sunshine.net>
- Date: Sun, 19 May 2013 22:23:16 -0700
- To: Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
- CC: Web Payments CG <public-webpayments@w3.org>
On 5/19/13 8:58 PM, Manu Sporny wrote: > Let me know if you're happy with the changes. We're announcing the > project tomorrow morning EST. We can still change much of the text while > the campaign is active, so there will still be time to tinker with the > text over the next two weeks. > > -- manu > Good, I especially like that list of how you chose the students. Helped a lot. You sucked $50 out of me. :-) One last suggestion: these two sentences: "The bar was set quite high, and only the top rated students were selected. There were a few students that were above average; none of them made the cut." The wording of the second sentence puzzled me slightly at first. I think I understand it now, but I think it can be deleted; it's redundant. The previous sentence, by itself, implies that, doesn't it? How else could it have happened? (Assume a shifted normal curve on 40 top people: relative to that curve, some are poor, some fair, some are average, some are above average, and some exceptional. You only took the exceptional, ie, the top group; so all the other groups 'didn't make the cut'). Steven
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