Re: [w3c/payment-request] Describe privacy inplications of changing payment method (#849)

ianbjacobs requested changes on this pull request.

Hi Marcos, 

Minor editorial suggestions.

> @@ -222,10 +222,21 @@ <h2>
           <dfn>Steps for when a user changes payment method</dfn> (optional)
         </dt>
         <dd>
-          Steps that describe how to handle the user changing payment method or
-          monetary instrument (e.g., from a debit card to a credit card) that
-          results in a <a data-cite="WEBIDL#idl-dictionary">dictionary</a> or
-          <a data-cite="WEBIDL#idl-object">object</a> or null.
+          <p>
+            Steps that describe how to handle the user changing payment method
+            or monetary instrument (e.g., from a debit card to a credit card)
+            that results in a <a data-cite=
+            "WEBIDL#idl-dictionary">dictionary</a> or <a data-cite=
+            "WEBIDL#idl-object">object</a> or null.
+          </p>
+          <p>
+            A <a>payment handler</a> that define <a>steps for when a user

```suggestion
            A <a>payment handler</a> that defines <a>steps for when a user
```

> @@ -5300,6 +5320,13 @@ <h2>
           member with a third-party <a>payment handler</a> without user
           consent.
         </p>
+        <p>
+          Where sharing of privacy sensitive information might not be obvious

```suggestion
          Where sharing of privacy-sensitive information might not be obvious
```

> @@ -5300,6 +5320,13 @@ <h2>
           member with a third-party <a>payment handler</a> without user
           consent.
         </p>
+        <p>
+          Where sharing of privacy sensitive information might not be obvious
+          to users (e.g., <a data-lt=

```suggestion
          to users (e.g., when <a data-lt=
```

> @@ -5300,6 +5320,13 @@ <h2>
           member with a third-party <a>payment handler</a> without user
           consent.
         </p>
+        <p>
+          Where sharing of privacy sensitive information might not be obvious
+          to users (e.g., <a data-lt=
+          "payment method changed algorithm">changing payment methods</a>), it
+          is RECOMMEDED that user agents inform user of exactly what

```suggestion
          is RECOMMENDED that user agents inform the user of exactly what
```

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