Re: Updated Web Payments Working Group Charter

> On Jul 19, 2015, at 11:49 PM, Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com> wrote:
> 
> On 07/18/2015 03:57 PM, Ian Jacobs wrote:
>>>> I took a pass today; here is the revised charter:
>>>> http://www.w3.org/2015/06/payments-wg-charter
> 
> I went through it again w/ a fine toothed comb and tried very hard to
> find something I didn't agree with. Try as I may, nothing popped up as a
> red flag, or even anything close to one. I don't think it's because
> we're being too timid in the charter; it's rationally aggressive.
> 
> A few minor editorial issues:
> 
> 1. The image is not linked to correctly.

Fixed link. I’ve also added a first pass of a longdesc
 https://github.com/w3c/webpayments-ig/blob/master/latest/charters/images/WebPaymentsBasicPaymentFlow-desc.txt

> 2. "Transactions 1.0" should be "Web Payments 1.0”.

Fixed.

> 3. The charter should break the APIs out into different specs. So,
>   there should be two more "Web Payments API 1.0" and
>   "Web Payments Services 1.0", in addition to "Web Payments 1.0”.

Left untouched per IG call today.

> 4. "high-evel" should be "high-level".
> 5. "Care Payments 1.0"... aww, I didn't know we were working on that.
>    How sweet.
> 6. ".1 FTE" - maybe "10% FTE”?

I think those were already fixed. Thanks!

Ian

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