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- Date: Tue, 24 May 2016 13:07:06 -0600
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Howdy folks, fyi, I took a stab at editorial polishing of abstract, intro material, terminology, etc. The PR is here.. https://github.com/w3c/webauthn/pull/109 It explicitly includes a bunch of Vijay's recent commits (which have already been merged to master) because of the way I created my branch, my commits are down at the bottom of the commit list. Also, there is a textual diff in the "vijaybh-lots-of-fpwd-issues-jeffh-build" branch here.. https://github.com/w3c/webauthn/blob/vijaybh-lots-of-fpwd-issues-jeffh-build/diffs/diff-webauthn-vijaybh-lots-of-fpwd-issues-jeffh-build-e799e94-2016-05-20--from--webauthn-master-2016-05-20-0950a1d-index.pdf ..github will render it in the browser (cool!), although it doesn't seem to work every time -- it's also attached to this message. the PR detailed description is included below. HTH, =JeffH https://github.com/w3c/webauthn/pull/109 The commits represented in this PR comprise the following edits: Polish abstract. Convert "Use Cases" section into an "Introduction" containing a "use cases" subsection. Add explanatory material to Introduction. Make modest clarifying alterations to the use cases proper. Polish/clarify "Conformance" section. Add RFC2119 statement and reference. Move "Terminology" section to be after "Conformance". Polish/Expand "Terminology" section. Move biblio.json into index.src.html and rename biblio.json to biblio.json.bak Added some folks to #acknowledgements. Note 1: this PR includes an experiment regarding section titles that refer to WebAuthn API WebIDL objects -- altered the WebAuthn Assertion section to contain a link directly into the IDL rather than be self-referential -- seems more useful to me, WDYT ? Note 2: this PR creates a diffs subdirectory, containing a diff of rendered plain-text of this index.src.html from the latest in master. See https://github.com/w3c/webauthn/tree/vijaybh-lots-of-fpwd-issues-jeffh-build/diffs Fixes #92. makes some progress on #66 et al.
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