- From: <jeff.hodges@kingsmountain.com>
- Date: Tue, 24 May 2016 13:07:06 -0600
- To: public-webauthn@w3.org
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Howdy folks,
fyi, I took a stab at editorial polishing of abstract, intro material,
terminology, etc. The PR is here..
https://github.com/w3c/webauthn/pull/109
It explicitly includes a bunch of Vijay's recent commits (which have
already been merged to master) because of the way I created my branch,
my commits are down at the bottom of the commit list.
Also, there is a textual diff in the
"vijaybh-lots-of-fpwd-issues-jeffh-build" branch here..
https://github.com/w3c/webauthn/blob/vijaybh-lots-of-fpwd-issues-jeffh-build/diffs/diff-webauthn-vijaybh-lots-of-fpwd-issues-jeffh-build-e799e94-2016-05-20--from--webauthn-master-2016-05-20-0950a1d-index.pdf
..github will render it in the browser (cool!), although it doesn't
seem to work every time -- it's also attached to this message.
the PR detailed description is included below.
HTH,
=JeffH
https://github.com/w3c/webauthn/pull/109
The commits represented in this PR comprise the following edits:
Polish abstract.
Convert "Use Cases" section into an "Introduction" containing a
"use cases" subsection.
Add explanatory material to Introduction.
Make modest clarifying alterations to the use cases proper.
Polish/clarify "Conformance" section.
Add RFC2119 statement and reference.
Move "Terminology" section to be after "Conformance".
Polish/Expand "Terminology" section.
Move biblio.json into index.src.html and rename biblio.json to
biblio.json.bak
Added some folks to #acknowledgements.
Note 1: this PR includes an experiment regarding section titles that
refer to WebAuthn API WebIDL objects -- altered the WebAuthn Assertion
section to contain a link directly into the IDL rather than be
self-referential -- seems more useful to me, WDYT ?
Note 2: this PR creates a diffs subdirectory, containing a diff of
rendered plain-text of this index.src.html from the latest in master.
See
https://github.com/w3c/webauthn/tree/vijaybh-lots-of-fpwd-issues-jeffh-build/diffs
Fixes #92.
makes some progress on #66 et al.
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