- From: timeless <timeless@gmail.com>
- Date: Sun, 5 Jul 2009 01:25:00 +0300
- To: marcosc@opera.com
- Cc: public-webapps <public-webapps@w3.org>
On Fri, Jul 3, 2009 at 6:55 PM, Marcos Caceres<marcosc@opera.com> wrote: > Addressed your final set of editorial issues. If satisfied with the > corrections, please give us > an OK for the DoC :) DoC: OK except for the one below. >> 4:37 PM A user agent will acquire a potential Zip archive from a data >> transfer protocol that either labels resources with a media type (e.g. >> [HTTP]) or from a data transfer protocol that does not label resources >> with a media type (e.g., BitTorrent, Bluetooth, etc.). >> >> A tautology ... >> (yes, i know we're trying to say this, but is there a better way to write it?) > > I think I will leave it. The point here is to alert the reader that we > handle both cases. Oh, I wasn't asking you to remove it, just rewrite it ;-) A user agent can acquire a potential Zip archive both from data transfer protocols which label resources with media types (e.g. ....) and from data transfer protocols which do not (e.g. ...). I think you already got rid of the e.g.+etc. pair.
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