Re: [w3c/permissions] Add + export definition of express permission (PR #301)

@miketaylr approved this pull request.

Some suggested tweaks to make this more readable.

> @@ -219,10 +219,15 @@ <h2>
         </h2>
         <p>
           A <dfn class="export" data-local-lt="feature">powerful feature</dfn> is a web platform
-          feature (usually an API) for which a user has to [=permission/grant=] [=permission=]
-          before the feature can be used. Access to the feature is determined by the <a>environment
-          settings object</a> by the user having [=permission/granted=] permission via UI, or by
-          satisfying some criteria that is equivalent to a permission [=permission/grant=].
+          feature (usually an API) for which a user gives [=express permission=] before the feature
+          can be used. Access to the feature is determined by the <a>environment settings
+          object</a> by the user having [=permission/granted=] permission via UI, or by satisfying
+          some criteria that is equivalent to a permission [=permission/grant=].
+        </p>
+        <p>
+          <dfn class="export">Express permission</dfn> refers to an act by the user, e.g. via user
+          interface or host device platform features, via which the user [=permission/grants=]
+          [=permission=] the use of the feature by the web application.

```suggestion
          [=permission=] to use the feature by the web application.
```

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