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@miketaylr commented on this pull request.
> @@ -219,10 +219,15 @@ <h2>
</h2>
<p>
A <dfn class="export" data-local-lt="feature">powerful feature</dfn> is a web platform
- feature (usually an API) for which a user has to [=permission/grant=] [=permission=]
- before the feature can be used. Access to the feature is determined by the <a>environment
- settings object</a> by the user having [=permission/granted=] permission via UI, or by
- satisfying some criteria that is equivalent to a permission [=permission/grant=].
+ feature (usually an API) for which a user gives [=express permission=] before the feature
+ can be used. Access to the feature is determined by the <a>environment settings
+ object</a> by the user having [=permission/granted=] permission via UI, or by satisfying
+ some criteria that is equivalent to a permission [=permission/grant=].
+ </p>
+ <p>
+ <dfn class="export">Express permission</dfn> refers to an act by the user, e.g. via user
+ interface or host device platform features, via which the user [=permission/grants=]
```suggestion
interface or host device platform features, through which the user [=permission/grants=]
```
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