- From: Karl Dubost <karl@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 12 Apr 2006 15:45:46 +0900
- To: public-webapi@w3.org
Hi,
This is a QA Review comment for "The XMLHttpRequest Object"
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-XMLHttpRequest-20060405/
Wed, 05 Apr 2006 17:02:33 GMT
First WD
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This specification defines the XMLHttpRequest object, an API that
provides some HTTP client functionality.
]]]
-- The XMLHttpRequest Object
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-XMLHttpRequest-20060405/
Wed, 05 Apr 2006 17:02:33 GMT
The abstract section is a bit vague, out of the document context.
Maybe because of the "some". What about?
"This specification defines the XMLHttpRequest object, an API that
provides additional HTTP client functionality for transferring data
between a client and a server."
--
Karl Dubost - http://www.w3.org/People/karl/
W3C Conformance Manager, QA Activity Lead
QA Weblog - http://www.w3.org/QA/
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