Re: Content comments -- Re: IA First Drafts from Charlotte

Thanks Shawn, here are my comments. Not inline but as marginal notes.

Charlotte how do you want these comments posted?

On Wed, Feb 8, 2017 at 10:12 PM, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> wrote:

> Hi Charlotte and all,
>
> Thanks again for all this! Great to see your ideas. I look forward to the
> iterations of it.
>
> I took a first pass at comments in the doc on content of the site. In the
> attached, my comments are tracked as changes and preceded with "SLH:". As
> expected, I agree with most of your suggestions for "removal" of content.
> Some of the other changes I think we need to think through and maybe mock
> up. I think I understand some, and some I'm not sure how they would fit
> together with the IA and other content. I look forward to learning more
> about what you are thinking on these.
>
> Best,
> ~Shawn
>
>
>
> On 2/8/2017 9:17 AM, Shawn Henry wrote:
>
>> Attached!
>>
>


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