Content comments -- Re: IA First Drafts from Charlotte

Hi Charlotte and all,

Thanks again for all this! Great to see your ideas. I look forward to the iterations of it.

I took a first pass at comments in the doc on content of the site. In the attached, my comments are tracked as changes and preceded with "SLH:". As expected, I agree with most of your suggestions for "removal" of content. Some of the other changes I think we need to think through and maybe mock up. I think I understand some, and some I'm not sure how they would fit together with the IA and other content. I look forward to learning more about what you are thinking on these.

Best,
~Shawn



On 2/8/2017 9:17 AM, Shawn Henry wrote:
> Attached!