Re: Quick action

I agree with Libby's suggestions.

For the Techniques definition I suggest we change the last word to 
"implemented" - or "satisfied and implemented"?  I don't feel that the word 
satisfied is quite descriptive enough.

It would read: Techniques are informative suggestions and examples for ways 
in which the success criteria of a checkpoint might be implemented.

Carol J. Smith

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----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Libby Cohen" <lcohen@alltech-tsi.org>
To: "'Henk Snetselaar'" <H.Snetselaar@bartimeus.nl>; 
<public-wai-eo-lexicon@w3.org>
Sent: Sunday, January 16, 2005 9:45 AM
Subject: RE: Quick action


>
> Three comments:
> (1) For the definition of "transcript," I suggest adding the following 
> after
> "sounds": "narration and dialogue." The phrase would read: "sounds,
> narration, and dialogue in an audio clip." (2) I also have a question 
> about
> where the apostrophe should be placed in the term "beginners." Is it a
> "beginner's" (for one beginner) or "beginners'" (for many beginners)
> lexicon. I prefer "beginners'". (3) For introduction statement, I suggest
> adding after "aid translators" the following "and novices." The sentence
> would read: "The purpose of setting up this beginners' lexicon is to aid
> translators and novices by describing..."
> Libby
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: public-wai-eo-lexicon-request@w3.org
> [mailto:public-wai-eo-lexicon-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Henk Snetselaar
> Sent: Saturday, January 15, 2005 4:44 PM
> To: public-wai-eo-lexicon@w3.org
> Subject: Quick action
>
> Hi all,
>
> Due to last EOWG call here some proposals and requests.
>
> With the input of last EOWG call and additional suggestions of people like
> Andrew and Pasquale, I altered some of the descriptions of our provisional
> results presented to EOWG the 12th of January.
>
> You will find a next LexiconOverview version 12 as attachment. See
> especially the worksheet titled 'Lex-ATAG'. In this sheet you will find in
> column A our proposal of 12 January, in column B the altered descriptions
> since 14 January and in column C some notes about the changes I made.
>
> Please read the altered descriptions and reply to the list whether you 
> agree
> or not no later than Monday 17 January.
>
> Below follows an introduction for the ATAG people when sending our
> description proposals. Please read, consider and comment also about this
> intro.
>
> ++++++++++++++++
> The EOWG has initiated a 'Lexicon Task Force' that is setting up a
> 'Beginners Lexicon' of WAI terms. This should become a concise lexicon 
> with
> descriptions in clear and plain language. The purpose of setting up this
> beginners lexicon is to aid translators by describing the meaning of
> (technical) terms with a 'WAI contextual meaning'. See list below for
> document addresses concerning the Lexicon work.
>
> While selecting the entries for this lexicon we collected the entries that
> are also part of the ATAG 2.0 Glossary draft. For some of the ATAG 2.0
> glossary entries we will propose an alternative description.
>
> Lexicon addresses information:
> - First draft of a Lexicon overview:
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/lexicon/Overview.html
> - Lexicon requirements document:
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-lexicon
> - Lexicon Task Force Work Statement:
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/2004/lexicon.html
> - Lexicon list archives:
> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-wai-eo-lexicon
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