Re: Ian Jacobs comments [Was: New draft - please review]

On Feb 14, 2014, at 3:50 PM, "Charles McCathie Nevile" <chaals@yandex-team.ru> wrote:

> In which I confirm that I have now looked over the outstanding comment in this mail, viz.
> 
> On Tue, 11 Feb 2014 06:41:15 +0100, Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org> wrote:
> 
>> - Four separate sections of the document talk about Notes: 7.1 (2
>>  paragraphs), 7.1.2 (1 paragraph), 7.3.3 (1 paragraph), and 7.8 (a
>>  few more paragraphs). I believe you can consolidate all this text
>>  and remove some of the redundancy. I am happy to propose concrete
>>  edits if you think that would be useful.
> 
> Most of the trimming happened in 7.1.2 (maturity levels). I don't think consolidating everything makes sense - the relevatnt sections describe how notes fit into
> - the overall development process
> - the different types of Technical Reports published
> - what happens when work is abandoned, and
> - a section describing what has to be done to make a Note (not much) and what can be a Note (most things).
> 
> Moving the first three sections into the fourth would be inconsistent with the general structure of the document - and vice versa.
> 
> If you think this should be further addressed, please raise an issue.

If I find time I will propose a concrete revision that eliminates redundancies. 

Ian

> 
> cheers
> 
> chaals
> 
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