Re: action-235 Draft middle way draft on permitted uses

Based on some of the feedback from calls and our f2f meeting, I've updated a number of these sections and tried to provide more clear formatting via HTML. Those updates are available attached and at: http://npdoty.name/w3c/middle-way

In particular, for action-275, it was requested that I remove instances of "tracking" from the proposal text, as is the case with the editors' draft, which I've now done.

All comments would be welcome.
Thanks,
Nick

Received on Wednesday, 17 October 2012 07:31:08 UTC