Re: TPE Document, S2.3 P1

I made the following change, which conveys the same thing but without
the double negative and paragraph break.

....Roy

Index: tracking-dnt.html
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RCS file: /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html,v
retrieving revision 1.29
retrieving revision 1.30
diff -u -r1.29 -r1.30
--- tracking-dnt.html	31 Oct 2011 23:11:47 -0000	1.29
+++ tracking-dnt.html	31 Oct 2011 23:30:53 -0000	1.30
@@ -210,9 +210,11 @@
           defined by this specification is applicable to all forms of user
           agent, the compliance requirements are specifically concerned with
           the privacy expectations of a human user and the tracking of their
-          browsing history over time.  Hence, user agents that do not have
-          some form of "browsing" nature or do not communicate with more
-          than one site are not expected to comply with this protocol.
+          browsing history over time.
+          User agents that do not have a <q>browsing</q> nature, such as
+          mobile apps that communicate with one service exclusively, are not
+          the intended target for this protocol, though they can implement
+          the protocol if they so desire.
         </p>

Received on Monday, 31 October 2011 23:33:19 UTC