- From: Jeff Pan <Jeff.Pan@manchester.ac.uk>
- Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2005 16:24:34 +0100
- To: "Benjamin Nguyen" <Benjamin.Nguyen@inria.fr>
- Cc: "SWBPD" <public-swbp-wg@w3.org>, "Phil Tetlow" <philip.tetlow@uk.ibm.com>
Hi Benjamin, Thanks very much for your review. We have been revising the draft according to your comments. Meanwhile, we wonder if you could clarify the following comment: [I1 : Add more cross references from inside the main document to the bibliography, mainly grouping together articles on similar topics. As is, I find it to difficult to use with a simple alpha ordering. Maybe add some sort of bibliographical review as a section 2.4 / OR add references links into sections 2.2 and 2.3] Are you suggesting us to have more references in Sections 2.2 and 2.3? Kind regards, Jeff -- Dr. Jeff Z. Pan ( http://DL-Web.man.ac.uk/ ) School of Computer Science, The University of Manchester
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