- From: Doug Schepers <schepers@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 16 Oct 2008 01:14:44 -0400
- To: cyril.concolato@telecom-paristech.fr
- CC: SVG Working Group WG <public-svg-wg@w3.org>
Hi, Cyril- Cyril Concolato wrote (on 10/14/08 2:21 AM): > > SVG Working Group Issue Tracker a écrit : >> >> ISSUE-2135 (image element ambiguities): Ambiguities in the 'image' >> element [Last Call: SVG 1.2 Tiny ] >> >> http://www.w3.org/Graphics/SVG/WG/track/issues/2135 >> >> Raised by: Doug Schepers >> On product: Last Call: SVG 1.2 Tiny >> Cyril Concolato >> <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-svg/2008Oct/0110.html>: >> [[ >> * Section 5.7 The 'image' element >> In the first sentence, the words "complete document" seems to imply >> that an (XML) document can be referenced from an image element while >> the second sentence says the opposite. Could you rephrase ? > I suggest the following editing. Replace: > "The 'image' element indicates that the contents of a complete document > are to be rendered into a given rectangle within the current user > coordinate system." > with > "The 'image' element indicates that the contents of an image are to be > rendered into a given rectangle within the current user coordinate system." Corrected as requested. >> The attribute definitions for the 'image' element does not use the >> usual 'lacuna value sentence' for x, y, width and height. > For x, y, width and height, replace: > "If the attribute is not specified, the effect is as if a value of "0" > were specified." > with > "The lacuna value is '0'." Corrected as requested. >> Could you rephrase the following sentence? It does not look like a >> correct sentence: "For optimizing download time by requiring a >> particular content format authors are encouraged to use >> 'requiredFormats', instead of 'type'." > In image, audio, video, replace: > "For optimizing download time by requiring a particular content format > authors are encouraged to use 'requiredFormats', instead of 'type'." > with > "To indicate the media formats and avoid that a User Agent downloads > media in formats that it does not support, authors are encouraged to use > 'requiredFormats' instead of 'type'." Corrected to say: [[ To ensure that a User Agent only downloads media in formats that it supports, thus optimizing download time and bandwidth usage, authors are encouraged to use 'requiredFormats', instead of 'type'. ]] Please let us know if this satisfies your comment. Regards- -Doug
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