- From: Cyril Concolato <cyril.concolato@enst.fr>
- Date: Tue, 14 Oct 2008 07:48:30 +0200
- To: SVG Working Group WG <public-svg-wg@w3.org>
Hi all, Following a discussion with Doug, please find a summary of my comments and of how we can deal with them efficiently. I've tried to categorize them according to the following classification: SIMPLE EDITING : fixing specific typos, checking/rephrasing specific sentences ... MEDIUM EDITING : rewriting of a whole paragraph (larger than a sentence but not changing the whole spec) GLOBAL EDITING : editing that needs to be done on the whole spec SIMPLE DISCUSSION : things for which I don't have an answer and need clarifications. The discussion is probably simple DISCUSSION : longer discussion I think Following this email, I will send separate emails either proposing precise edits for editing and also email for those comments that need discussion so that you can have a better idea on the problem. SIMPLE EDITING ISSUE-2125 General Typos GLOBAL EDITING ISSUE-2126 consistent use of lacuna value SIMPLE DISCUSSION ISSUE-2127 CR exit criteria SIMPLE EDITING ISSUE-2128 Introduction should mention audio playback SIMPLE DISCUSSION ISSUE-2129 Definition section is too long and needs clarifications (bbox, canvas, etc.) SIMPLE EDITING ISSUE-2130 Basic Data Types section needs clarifications SIMPLE EDITING ISSUE-2131 Syntax for baseProfile is ambiguous GLOBAL EDITING ISSUE-2132 Attribute definitions are confusing SIMPLE EDITING ISSUE-2133 title/desc typo DISCUSSION ISSUE-2134 Ambiguities in the 'use' element SIMPLE EDITING ISSUE-2135 Ambiguities in the 'image' element SIMPLE DISCUSSION ISSUE-2136 Add explanation for children of container elements with false conditional attributes SIMPLE DISCUSSION ISSUE-2137 Add clarification about begin time for canvas negotiation SIMPLE DISCUSSION ISSUE-2138 Error processing differences in SVG and HTML DISCUSSION ISSUE-2139 Add note regarding eRR attribute and prefetch element SIMPLE EDITING ISSUE-2140 Ambiguities in mediaSize SIMPLE EDITING ISSUE-2141 prefetch encoding: UTF-8/UTF-16 SIMPLE EDITING ISSUE-2142 Use of metadata attributes unclear DISCUSSION ISSUE-2143 Clarify clipping and overflow SIMPLE DISCUSSION ISSUE-2144 'buffered-rendering' property vs 'static' DISCUSSION ISSUE-2145 Clarify media timeline and document timeline DISCUSSION ISSUE-2146 Contradictions in event dispatching MEDIUM EDITING ISSUE-2147 Section on externally referenced documents confusing SIMPLE DISCUSSION ISSUE-2148 Clarify script outside rootmost svg element SIMPLE DISCUSSION ISSUE-2149 Paced interpolation of polygons SIMPLE DISCUSSION ISSUE-2150 Clarify 'required' attribute SIMPLE EDITING ISSUE-2151 Add feature strings for metadata attributes Cyril -- Cyril Concolato Maître de Conférences/Associate Professor Groupe Mutimedia/Multimedia Group Département Traitement du Signal et Images /Dept. Signal and Image Processing Ecole Nationale Supérieure des Télécommunications 46 rue Barrault 75 013 Paris, France http://tsi.enst.fr/~concolat
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