[Bug 4914] editorial changes suggested by webmaster

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4914

           Summary: editorial changes suggested by webmaster
           Product: SML
           Version: FPWD
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Core+Interchange Format
        AssignedTo: kumarp@microsoft.com
        ReportedBy: kumarp@microsoft.com
         QAContact: public-sml@w3.org


webmaster needs the following changes before FPWD can be made public on the
web.

1# The date of this document should be set on 06 August 2007 (date of the
publication, not 31 July) as the URI for "This version:", should be
     http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070806/
not
     http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070731

(In general we prefer the use of a trailing slash at the end of links when
they're used to reach some folder e.g http://www.w3.org/TR/sml-if/ instead of
http://www.w3.org/TR/sml-if)


2# It MUST include the name of the W3C group that produced the document. 
The name MUST be a link to a public page for the group.
3# mailingList Name : It MUST include the name of a mailing list for comments
that has a public archive.
4# mailingList Link : It MUST include a link to the public archive of that
mailing list.

For those points (2#, 3#, 4#) it's just the links that haven't been set yet on
the Status of the Document.


5#  The boilerplate text is incorrect, on both documents, I suggest that 
you copy/paste this one;
<p class="copyright"><a 
href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright">Copyright</a> 
&copy; 2007 <a href="http://www.w3.org/"><acronym title="World Wide Web 
Consortium">W3C</acronym></a><sup>&reg;</sup> (<a 
href="http://www.csail.mit.edu/"><acronym title="Massachusetts Institute 
of Technology">MIT</acronym></a>, <a 
href="http://www.ercim.org/"><acronym title="European Research 
Consortium for Informatics and Mathematics">ERCIM</acronym></a>, <a 
href="http://www.keio.ac.jp/">Keio</a>), All Rights Reserved. W3C <a 
href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Legal_Disclaimer">liability</a>, 
<a 
href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#W3C_Trademarks">trademark</a> 
and <a 
href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/copyright-documents">document 
use</a> rules apply.</p>
The errors came from the fact you directly used the signs © and ® 
instead of &copy; and &reg; .


6# There is some an error with you CSS style;
on the sml & sml-if documents; background-color coral is not a color.


7# Following Namespaces are invalid/unreachable
- On the sml document (~/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070806/)
        http://www.w3.org/2007/07/sml (3 occurrences)
        http://www.w3.org/2007/07/sml-err (3 occurrences)
        http://www.w3.org/2007/07/sml-function (3 occurrences)
        http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/sml (4 occurrences)
        http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/sml-err (2 occurrences)
        http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/sml-function (3 occurrences)
Should be ~/2007/08/ instead of ~/@@@@/@@/ or ~/2007/07/

http://msdn.microsoft.com/library/default.asp?url=/library/en-us/dnxml/html/schematron.asp 
(1 occurrence)
http://standards.iso.org/ittf/PubliclyAvailableStandards/c040833_ISO_IEC_19757-3_2006(E 
(1 occurrence)
http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070731 (1 occurrence) should be 
replaced by ~/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070806/

- On the sml-if document (~/TR/2007/WD-sml-if-20070806/)
http://www.w3.org/2007/07/sml (1 occurrence)
http://www.w3.org/2007/07/smlif (2 occurrences)
http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/smlif (2 occurrences)
Should be ~/2007/08/ instead of ~/@@@@/@@/ or ~/2007/07/

http://standards.iso.org/ittf/PubliclyAvailableStandards/c040833_ISO_IEC_19757-3_2006(E 
(1 occurrence)

http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-sml-20070731 (1 occurrence)
http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-sml-if-20070731 (1 occurrence)
please replace 20070731 by 20070806/


Also, I was unable to find the .xml versions of your documents under
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2007/xml/sml/build/
I'll need sml.xml & sml-if.xml.


Thanks for you attention,
Best regards.

-- 
Jules CLEMENT-RIPOCHE <jules@w3.org>    World Wide Web Consortium
W3C / System Team - Webmaster           http://www.w3.org/

Received on Saturday, 4 August 2007 00:13:06 UTC