- From: Jeanne Spellman <jspellman@spellmanconsulting.com>
- Date: Wed, 29 Jan 2020 10:40:48 -0500
- To: Silver Task Force <public-silver@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <4edc31e0-f77d-2901-972b-3444ba277e8a@spellmanconsulting.com>
== Summary == Kim put hours into the survey design. We will send to the AGWG and Silver list on Tuesday or Wednesday. Send comments to Jeanne by Tuesday night. Suggestions were made to shorten the survey. Updates from subgroups: Alt text will have the Techniques updated by next Tuesday. Clear Language has completed their work. There were suggestions from the group for changes: * Avoid repetition and use more cross-referencing. It's a chicken-egg problem because we don't have the material written yet to cross-reference to. * Add a tab that lists all the Methods. There needs to be a fast way for people who want to get to the Methods to get to that quickly. * Get more design help. Design help is in progress. We need to schedule usability testing. * Move the Guideline name above the tabs so it isn't repeated in every tab. Jeanne will do. * Suggest describing the Activity instead of having the guideline in the box. * Add H1 and change name to Clear Language Guidance for the H1 and title. * Change the guideline to make it more obvious that it applies to blocks of text and isn't addressing labels. There was discussion of the guideline text, which is the last to be written. "Use clear language that readers easily understand." We had a discussion of "easily understand". Some felt that "easily" could not be used in a legal context. One suggestion was to make it comparative, "more easily". The defense of easily is that it is used by the American Bar Association: "The goal is to create a clear and concise document that is easily understood.” -Better legal Writing-American Bar Association == Minutes == https://www.w3.org/2020/01/28-silver-minutes.html
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