- From: Adrian Paschke <adrian.paschke@biotec.tu-dresden.de>
- Date: Mon, 19 May 2008 09:44:10 +0200
- To: "'Gary Hallmark'" <gary.hallmark@oracle.com>
- Cc: <public-rif-wg@w3.org>
>And the Goals, Critical Success Factors, etc? Too many words, too many >pictures. Makes it look like we wasted a year with little output so we >dressed it up a lot :-) If not deleted, it should be condensed and >followed with a frank discussion of what requirements the current spec >does and does not address. That sounds like a good compromise for UCR. -Adrian -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- Von: Gary Hallmark [mailto:gary.hallmark@oracle.com] Gesendet: Freitag, 16. Mai 2008 20:38 An: Dave Reynolds Cc: Adrian Paschke; public-rif-wg@w3.org Betreff: Re: RIF UCR --> RIF UC I like the work Adrian has done on the document. The examples look much more uniform, and provide a much better introduction to the spec. I also appreciate the fact the Adrian's changes have been available on the wiki for some time for all to see. Can you honestly say upon reading that you wouldn't like to delete every "Motivates" section? Aren't they very uneven, and don't most seem to require a huge stretch of the use case? And the Goals, Critical Success Factors, etc? Too many words, too many pictures. Makes it look like we wasted a year with little output so we dressed it up a lot :-) If not deleted, it should be condensed and followed with a frank discussion of what requirements the current spec does and does not address.
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