Re: [UCR] editorial comments on UCR document

>>2) 2. Use Cases
>>
>>2nd paragraph, last sentence"
>>"However, this informality may lead readers to the conclusion 
>>that rules can perform arbitrary actions in the real world. 
>>This is not the case; the RIF WG has not yet decided on the 
>>ultimate power that rules will have."
>>
>>  This might be a more severe cvomment than the others, but I honestly
>>  find these two sentences more confusing than enlightning 
>>and would opt
>>  for removing it. It doesn't seem to add anything.
> 
> This "disclaimer" was proposed by Peter
> (http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-rif-wg/2006Jun/0149.html)
> 
> and it was decided during last week's telecon to add it. Could you
> suggest an alternative version?

yes, I found it, but I find it still confusing. What about this:

    This informality shall not lead readers to the conclusion
    that rules can perform arbitrary actions in the real world.
    It is beyond scope of the RIF WG to define the power that
    rules have in implemented systems, or whether the effects of these
    rules are to be processed and ultimately decided upon by a (human)
    agent. RIF focusses on the exchange of rules to cater for both,
    automatic and semi-automatic processing of rules.

Peter?


The rest of your changes sound good to me.

axel


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Received on Wednesday, 5 July 2006 08:41:42 UTC