- From: Guus Schreiber <guus.schreiber@vu.nl>
- Date: Fri, 21 Feb 2014 13:57:20 +0100
- To: Thomas Baker <tom@tombaker.org>
- CC: RDF Working Group <public-rdf-wg@w3.org>, Public RDF comments list <public-rdf-comments@w3.org>
On 03-02-14 20:12, Thomas Baker wrote: > On Mon, Feb 03, 2014 at 04:35:22PM +0100, Guus Schreiber wrote: >> Thanks again for your comments. Responses inline. > > Thank you, Guus. I am happy with your edits and explanations! > > To follow up on just one point: > >>> -- "The format of these statements is simple. It always has the >>> following form:" >>> >>> The use of "format" and "form" seems inconsistent, and the second >>> sentence could perhaps simply be dropped, leaving just: >>> >>> The form of these statements is simple: > > As written, the sentence in effect says: "The format of the statements has the > form". The notion of the _format_ of statements (instead of statements > themselves) having a form seems awkward, and "format" makes me think of > concrete syntaxes. How about: > > The template for such statements is simple: > > But I will not press the point... Tom, Now changed to: [[ The format of these statements is simple. A statement always has the following structure: ]] I hope you find that better. Best, Guus > > Tom > >> Thanks again! Very helpful indeed. New ED is at [1]. >> >> Guus >> >> [1] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/rdf/raw-file/default/rdf-primer/index.html# >
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