- From: Thomas Baker <tom@tombaker.org>
- Date: Mon, 3 Feb 2014 14:12:34 -0500
- To: Guus Schreiber <guus.schreiber@vu.nl>
- Cc: RDF Working Group <public-rdf-wg@w3.org>, Public RDF comments list <public-rdf-comments@w3.org>
On Mon, Feb 03, 2014 at 04:35:22PM +0100, Guus Schreiber wrote:
> Thanks again for your comments. Responses inline.
Thank you, Guus. I am happy with your edits and explanations!
To follow up on just one point:
> >-- "The format of these statements is simple. It always has the
> > following form:"
> >
> > The use of "format" and "form" seems inconsistent, and the second
> > sentence could perhaps simply be dropped, leaving just:
> >
> > The form of these statements is simple:
As written, the sentence in effect says: "The format of the statements has the
form". The notion of the _format_ of statements (instead of statements
themselves) having a form seems awkward, and "format" makes me think of
concrete syntaxes. How about:
The template for such statements is simple:
But I will not press the point...
Tom
> Thanks again! Very helpful indeed. New ED is at [1].
>
> Guus
>
> [1] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/rdf/raw-file/default/rdf-primer/index.html#
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Tom Baker <tom@tombaker.org>
Received on Monday, 3 February 2014 19:13:11 UTC