Re: Comments on 17 December 2013 WD of RDF 1.1 Primer

On Fri, Feb 21, 2014 at 01:57:20PM +0100, Guus Schreiber wrote:
> >As written, the sentence in effect says: "The format of the statements has the
> >form".  The notion of the _format_ of statements (instead of statements
> >themselves) having a form seems awkward, and "format" makes me think of
> >concrete syntaxes.  How about:
> >
> >     The template for such statements is simple:
...
> Now changed to:
> 
> [[
>   The format of these statements is simple. A statement always has the 
> following structure:
> ]]
> 
> I hope you find that better.

That looks fine.
Tom

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Tom Baker <tom@tombaker.org>

Received on Friday, 21 February 2014 15:04:32 UTC