- From: Thomas Baker <tom@tombaker.org>
- Date: Fri, 21 Feb 2014 10:03:27 -0500
- To: Guus Schreiber <guus.schreiber@vu.nl>
- Cc: RDF Working Group <public-rdf-wg@w3.org>, Public RDF comments list <public-rdf-comments@w3.org>
On Fri, Feb 21, 2014 at 01:57:20PM +0100, Guus Schreiber wrote: > >As written, the sentence in effect says: "The format of the statements has the > >form". The notion of the _format_ of statements (instead of statements > >themselves) having a form seems awkward, and "format" makes me think of > >concrete syntaxes. How about: > > > > The template for such statements is simple: ... > Now changed to: > > [[ > The format of these statements is simple. A statement always has the > following structure: > ]] > > I hope you find that better. That looks fine. Tom -- Tom Baker <tom@tombaker.org>
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