- From: Toby Inkster <tai@g5n.co.uk>
- Date: Wed, 13 May 2009 09:42:27 +0100
- To: Steven Pemberton <Steven.Pemberton@cwi.nl>
- Cc: "public-rdf-in-xhtml-tf@w3.org" <public-rdf-in-xhtml-tf@w3.org>, "Ian B. Jacobs" <ij@w3.org>
On Wed, 2009-05-13 at 00:13 +0200, Steven Pemberton wrote:
> http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/2009/rdfa-for-html-authors
Looks like a good start. A few comments:
| Essentially all knowledge is gathered as assertions of the form:
|
| URI property value
Would be nice to have a bit of punctuation in there to separate out the
components. Perhaps something like:
URI → property → value
And then for other N-Triples-like blocks in the text, employ the same
mechanism to demonstrate the triple.
| Unfortunately, this says that the creator of the page about the
| poem is T.S. Eliot, which is patently not true.
Might be more clear as "Unfortunately, this says that T. S. Eliot
created the Wikipedia page, which is patently not true."
| <a about"[_:W3C]" rel="foaf:homepage"
| href="http://www.w3.org/">W3C</a>
Missing an equals sign.
Under the "Packaging a group of relations" heading, the highlighted
@typeof doesn't actually do any packaging - the existing @about already
packages the properties together.
You may wish to include a brief introduction to a few commonly used
vocabs - e.g. FOAF, DC, iCal. Explain each one's scope and purpose and
about 6 to 10 of the most important classes and properties, and give a
little example of using them, and finally an example of using all three
together to describe, say, a book which has been written by a person,
which has a primary topic that is an event.
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Toby Inkster <mail@tobyinkster.co.uk>
Received on Wednesday, 13 May 2009 08:43:12 UTC