- From: Seaborne, Andy <andy.seaborne@hp.com>
- Date: Wed, 07 Sep 2005 10:27:53 +0100
- To: RDF Data Access Working Group <public-rdf-dawg@w3.org>
Corrections made based on this message - a coupel of exceptions inline. Thanks to Olivier for the review. Q for Eric near the end. v1.483 committed Andy Olivier Corby wrote: > I have found these typos in the WD. > > Best regards > > Olivier. > > > > > > 2.2 > > Definition : SPARQL Query > > The sentence below is present in the definition and repeated in the > paragraph just below : > "The graph pattern of a query is called the query pattern" Done > > > 2.4 > > Definition : Pattern Solution > > "The result f replacing every v in a graph pattern" -> > "The result f replacing every variable v in a graph pattern" Done > > > 2.8 > > Predicate-Object Lists > > "more than one triple pattern be employing" -> > "by employing" Done > > > 7. > > Definition : RDF Dataset Graph Pattern > > (<u1> G1) -> (<u1>, G1) (three times) > Done > > > 8.3 > > Restriction by Bound Variables > > Some variable names start with ? (?w ?whom) and some do not (mbox whom). > Done > > > 9.1 > > > "providing more than IRI" -> > "providing more than one IRI" > Done > > > 9.2 Specifying Named Graphs > > "used to provide one, named graph" -> > "used to provide one named graph" > Done > > > 9.3 > > Solution for ?who is "Bob", "Alice" and not "Bob Hacker", "Alice Hacker" > > > "This query finds the mbox together, with" -> > "This query finds the mbox together with" The document is correct ("who" comes from the dc:publisher not foaf:name). > > > 10.1 > > Definition : Projection > > "The projection of solution QS over a set" -> > "The projection of solution QSi over a set" It's better with QSi => QS > > > Definition : Distinct Solution Sequence > > "then write set(S) is the set" -> > "then write set(S) for the set" > Done > > 11 > > Namespaces > > "XML Schema datatypes with the prefix op:" -> > "XML Schema datatypes with the prefix xs:" > Done > > 11.1.1 > > XML Schema [] Eric - is this going to be a reference? I made it a ref the existing XMLSCHEMA-2 reference. > > > > 11.2.1.1 > > > "When a operand" -> > "When an operand" > Done > > > 11.2.3.2 > > "Queries with union and optionals" -> > "Queries with union and optional" "Queries with unions and optionals" > > > FILTER bound(?date)) -> > FILTER bound(?date) > Done > > Table 11.2 > > "Casting in SPARQL is peformed" -> > "Casting in SPARQL is performed" > Done > > "the casting operatoins" -> > "the casting operations" Done
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