Re: Some typos in WD [OK?]

Olivier,

Thank you for the comments.  All the changes you suggest have been applied to 
the editors' working copy [*] except as noted inline below.

Please let us know whether this response addresses your comments to your 
satisfaction.

	Andy

[*] http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/DataAccess/rq23/

Olivier Corby wrote:
> I have found these typos  in the   WD.
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> Best regards
> 
> Olivier.
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> 2.2
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> Definition : SPARQL Query
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> The sentence below is present in the definition and repeated  in the 
> paragraph just below :
> "The graph pattern of a query is called the query pattern"
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> 2.4
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> Definition : Pattern Solution
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> "The result f replacing every v in a graph pattern" ->
> "The result f replacing every variable v in a graph pattern"
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> 2.8
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> Predicate-Object Lists
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> "more than one triple pattern be employing" ->
> "by employing"
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> 7.
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> Definition : RDF Dataset Graph Pattern
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> (<u1> G1)  ->  (<u1>, G1)   (three times)
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> 8.3
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> Restriction by Bound Variables
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> Some variable names start with ? (?w ?whom) and some do not (mbox whom).
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> 9.1
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> "providing more than IRI" ->
> "providing more than one IRI"
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> 9.2 Specifying Named Graphs
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> "used to provide one, named graph"  ->
> "used to provide one named graph"
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> 9.3
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> Solution for ?who is "Bob", "Alice" and not "Bob Hacker", "Alice Hacker"

The document is correct ("who" comes from the dc:publisher not foaf:name).

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> "This query finds the mbox together, with" ->
> "This query finds the mbox together with"
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> 10.1
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> Definition : Projection
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> "The projection of solution QS over a set" ->
> "The projection of solution QSi over a set"

Made consistent (QS => QSi)

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> Definition : Distinct Solution Sequence
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> "then write set(S) is the set" ->
> "then write set(S) for the set"
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> 11
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> Namespaces
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> "XML Schema datatypes with the prefix op:" ->
> "XML Schema datatypes with the prefix xs:"
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> 11.1.1
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> XML Schema []
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> 11.2.1.1
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> "When a operand" ->
> "When an operand"
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> 11.2.3.2
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> "Queries with union and optionals" ->
> "Queries with union and optional"
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> FILTER bound(?date)) ->
> FILTER bound(?date)
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> Table 11.2
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> "Casting in SPARQL is peformed" ->
> "Casting in SPARQL is performed"
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> "the casting operatoins" ->
> "the casting operations"
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Received on Thursday, 6 October 2005 10:25:36 UTC