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Re: editorial

From: Pat Hayes <phayes@ihmc.us>
Date: Wed, 7 Aug 2013 22:57:24 -0700
Cc: David Wood <david@3roundstones.com>, Markus Lanthaler <markus.lanthaler@gmx.net>, Gregg Kellogg <gregg@greggkellogg.net>, public-rdf-comments Comments <public-rdf-comments@w3.org>
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To: Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>

On Aug 7, 2013, at 9:15 PM, Manu Sporny wrote:

> On 06/12/2013 11:11 AM, Pat Hayes wrote:
>>> Thanks for your careful review.  Do you think these concerns could
>>> be addressed in a minimal way by a reference to the RDF Primer in
>>> the introduction?
>> 
>> Yes for me, but I recognize that the extreme RDF-phobia which Manu
>> describes might mean they would not want to force readers to actually
>> read any RDF documents. So a brief intuitive account of the "JSON-DL
>> data model" would also do. It could just be a couple of sentences
>> saying that the data model assumes that data is in the form of a
>> graph of nodes using IRIs and some other stuff.
> 
> Pat, your feedback has been tracked here:
> 
> https://github.com/json-ld/json-ld.org/issues/263
> 
> I've tried to address your concerns in this commit:
> 
> https://github.com/json-ld/json-ld.org/commit/955c134f4735fc680b5df18b054590563537affa
> 
> There were a number of changes made to fix some of the broken flow of
> the document. Also, I added a section providing an overview of the data
> model, you can find the section here:
> 
> http://json-ld.org/spec/latest/json-ld/#data-model-overview
> 
> Let me know if that's not acceptable to you and we can try again.

That handles my feedback comment adequately. I would suggest a tiny edit:

Developers that are familar /// Developers who are familar

Pat

> 
> -- manu
> 
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