- From: Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 8 Aug 2011 13:18:00 +0200
- To: Eric Prud'hommeaux <eric@w3.org>
- Cc: rdb2RDF WG <public-rdb2rdf-wg@w3.org>, Juan Sequeda <juanfederico@gmail.com>
Eric, here some editorial comments on the DM draft. To make it clear, I used http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/rdb2rdf/directMapping/EGP I will send a separate mail with more substantial, ie, non editorial comments. Cheers Ivan - just a reminder: do not forget to change the date for the draft in the header part:-); it is even older than the 'previous version' URI:-) - first sql table in 2.1: for the purpose of consistency, I would put the PRIMARY KEY(ID) of the second table on a separate line - 2.1: in the table right after the definition, in the 'People' table, shouldn't it be ->Adresses(ID) ? (It is, currently, Address(ID)). The same bug is also there in the preceding paragraph describing the notation. - 2.1: The Turtle example should have (I believe) a '.' after the @base declaration - 2.2: The Turtle example should have (I believe) a '.' after the @base declaration - 2.5: The Turtle example should have (I believe) a '.' after the @base declaration - 3, second definition: do you really meant 'soul column'? Shouldn't that be 'sole column'? ---- Ivan Herman, W3C Semantic Web Activity Lead Home: http://www.w3.org/People/Ivan/ mobile: +31-641044153 PGP Key: http://www.ivan-herman.net/pgpkey.html FOAF: http://www.ivan-herman.net/foaf.rdf
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