[Bug 4713] [FT] editorial: 3.5.1 Ordered Selection

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• Date: Sat, 23 Jun 2007 10:05:50 +0000
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           Summary: [FT] editorial: 3.5.1 Ordered Selection
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Last Call drafts
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: minor
          Priority: P2
         Component: Full Text
        AssignedTo: jim.melton@acm.org
        ReportedBy: jmdyck@ibiblio.org
         QAContact: public-qt-comments@w3.org


3.5.1 Ordered Selection

[1]
para 1
"An ordered selection consist of a full-text selection"
    s/consist/consists/

[2]
"An ordered selection controls the order of tokens and phrases to be ..."
    s/controls/constrains/

[3]
para 3
"and for which the order the matching tokens have in the text"
    A bit clunky. Perhaps:
        and which also satisfy the following constraint:
        the order that the matching tokens have in the text

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