[DM] MS-DM-LC2-004

• From: Michael Rys <mrys@microsoft.com>
• Date: Sun, 30 Nov 2003 22:23:56 -0800
• To: <public-qt-comments@w3.org>
• Message-ID: <EB0A327048144442AFB15FCE18DC96C701642EF3@RED-MSG-31.redmond.corp.microsoft.com>

Section 1 Introduction
Editorial

"Connected": drop word or define it. 

Also move third sentence in paragraph into second position.

Received on Monday, 1 December 2003 01:23:59 UTC