- From: Paul Groth <p.t.groth@vu.nl>
- Date: Thu, 4 Apr 2013 07:39:52 +0200
- To: Yolanda Gil <gil@isi.edu>
- CC: "Miles, Simon" <simon.miles@kcl.ac.uk>, "public-prov-wg@w3.org" <public-prov-wg@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <A18EEE12-4B61-4F1E-A2D8-C96E18BBA15F@vu.nl>
Sounds good to me Paul On Apr 4, 2013, at 1:18, Yolanda Gil <gil@isi.edu> wrote: > Thank you for your comments, Paul! > > I think you are right that the final overview of capabilities are a bit buried in section 3 and worth highlighting better. On the other hand, the complete example would seem to belong in section 3. How about the following: > > Section 3.11 The Complete Example > Section 4: Summary of Capabilities of PROV > > Best, > > Yolanda > > > Yolanda Gil, USC/ISI > +1-310-448-8794 > > > > On Apr 3, 2013, at 7:40 AM, Paul Groth <p.t.groth@vu.nl> wrote: > >> Hi Simona and Yolanda, >> >> Here are my comments on the Primer. >> >> Overall, this is a really great document and I'm happy for it to be the final primer. I especially like the example and how it fits together in the very end. Some detailed comments are below. >> >> Thanks >> Paul >> >> ===Comments=== >> >> Abstract >> >> - We need to be more specific about what the Primer is for. I would say "PROV Data Model for provenance interchange on the web" and not "PROV specification". >> >> - "PROV is a core data model" change to "PROV defines a core data model" >> >> Introduction >> - Again watch out for PROV specification >> - Third sentence, I would remove "proposed" >> - In the "agent-centered provenance" bullet point can you replace "entities" with something else like people/organzations ? >> - Do you want references to FOAF and Dublin core in the paragraph under the bullet points >> >> Section 2.9 >> - remove ", as below" >> >> Section 3.1 >> - do you want to put a pointer in the last paragraph to the graphical conventions on the wiki? >> >> Section 3.11 >> - Why don't you use the correct extension for the turtle (.ttl) and prov-n (.provn) files that you link to? >> >> I wonder if section 3.11 should be a Section 4. I find the capabilities of PROV to be really interesting and useful to know. A suggestion? >> >> Section 4: Summary >> Section 4.1 The Complete Example >> Section 4.2 Capabilities of PROV >> >> >> >> On Fri, Mar 29, 2013 at 6:36 PM, Miles, Simon <simon.miles@kcl.ac.uk> wrote: >>> Hello, >>> >>> The primer is now staged and ready for review: >>> >>> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/primer/NOTE-prov-primer-20130430/Overview.html >>> >>> Please provide reviews by 4 April. >>> >>> thanks, >>> Simon and Yolanda >>> >>> Dr Simon Miles >>> Senior Lecturer, Department of Informatics >>> Kings College London, WC2R 2LS, UK >>> +44 (0)20 7848 1166 >>> >>> Evolutionary Testing of Autonomous Software Agents: >>> http://eprints.dcs.kcl.ac.uk/1370/ >> >> >> >> -- >> ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- >> Dr. Paul Groth (p.t.groth@vu.nl) >> http://www.few.vu.nl/~pgroth/ >> Assistant Professor >> - Web & Media Group | Department of Computer Science >> - The Network Institute >> VU University Amsterdam >
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