- From: Luc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
- Date: Wed, 26 Sep 2012 22:56:49 +0100
- To: Paul Groth <p.t.groth@vu.nl>
- CC: "public-prov-wg@w3.org" <public-prov-wg@w3.org>
HI Paul, I would suggest you point to the current editor's draft and the html diff. Luc On 26/09/12 14:42, Paul Groth wrote: > Maybe I should include the link to the current diff file in the response. > > I think in the email response people will want to see where the > changes were made and not just the diff. But I can just include a link > to the current editor's draft and that will resolve it. > > cheers > Paul > > On Wed, Sep 26, 2012 at 3:31 PM, Luc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk> wrote: >> Hi Paul, >> >> The prov-dm document points to a diff file: >> http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/diff.html >> >> However, it's accumulated diffs, not diff snapshot for a single issue. >> >> I would have thought it was obvious that we can always go to the >> Editor's draft or the full diff? >> >> Luc >> >> On 26/09/2012 14:08, Paul Groth wrote: >>> Hi Luc, >>> >>> I think this looks much better. I agree in keeping it. I wondered if >>> we should link to the diff or link to the file with the diff so the >>> change can be seen. Essentially, the file looks a lot better than the >>> diff itself. >>> >>> What do you think? >>> Paul >>> >>> On Tue, Sep 25, 2012 at 12:50 PM, Luc Moreau<l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk> wrote: >>> >>>> Dear all, >>>> >>>> I have drafted a response to this issue, which you can find on the wiki at >>>> http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/wiki/ResponsesToPublicComments#ISSUE-501_.28DrivingACarToBoston.29 >>>> >>>> I copy it below for your convenience. >>>> Comments? feedback? >>>> >>>> Luc >>>> >>>> ISSUE-501 (DrivingACarToBoston) >>>> >>>> Original email: >>>> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-prov-wg/2012Sep/0091.html >>>> Tracker: http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/501 >>>> Group Response: >>>> >>>> As the author suggests, "driving a car to boston" is an example, and >>>> therefore, needed to be put in a box. >>>> It now appears as example 5, following examples 4 and 3 containing examples >>>> of usage and generation of digital entities. >>>> The author's comment confirms it is important to include this example in >>>> this document. Indeed, the users states that "most people would consider a >>>> single entity (not two or more)", whereas prov modelling requires the "car >>>> at various locations" to be seen as different entities. >>>> In general, we have been careful to limit the number of examples involving >>>> physical entities, however, including a few is important to demonstrate the >>>> generality of the model. >>>> >>>> References: >>>> Implemented change changes: >>>> http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/diff/0bbd5b38ab1b/model/prov-dm.html >>>> Original author's acknowledgement: >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> On 10/09/2012 09:33, Provenance Working Group Issue Tracker wrote: >>>> >>>> PROV-ISSUE-501: Data Model Section 2.1.1, example [prov-dm] >>>> >>>> http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/501 >>>> >>>> Raised by: Luc Moreau >>>> On product: prov-dm >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/wiki/LC_Feedback#Data_Model_Section_2.1.1.2C_example >>>> >>>> ISSUE-463 >>>> >>>> The example of driving a car from Boston to Cambridge is not intuitive to >>>> most readers and does not highlight the strengths of the PROV model. The >>>> example focuses on the relocation of a physical object, which most people >>>> would consider a single entity (not two or more). The examples later in the >>>> spec use document editing, which is a straightforward example that will be >>>> very intuitive to readers. I suggest replacing the car example with a >>>> document example, which would also be more consistent with the rest of the >>>> spec. >>>> >>>> Note: This example should also be contained within an "example" box rather >>>> than as part of the text. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> Professor Luc Moreau >>>> Electronics and Computer Science tel: +44 23 8059 4487 >>>> University of Southampton fax: +44 23 8059 2865 >>>> Southampton SO17 1BJ email: l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk >>>> United Kingdom http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm >>>> >>>> >>> >>> >> -- >> Professor Luc Moreau >> Electronics and Computer Science tel: +44 23 8059 4487 >> University of Southampton fax: +44 23 8059 2865 >> Southampton SO17 1BJ email: l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk >> United Kingdom http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm >> >> > > -- Professor Luc Moreau Electronics and Computer Science tel: +44 23 8059 4487 University of Southampton fax: +44 23 8059 2865 Southampton SO17 1BJ email: l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk United Kingdom http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm
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