Re: constraint subfigures

Hi Tim,

I have updated as you suggested.
I am closing pending review. Can you check and
confirm we can close this issue.
Thanks,
Luc

On 01/17/2012 01:52 PM, Timothy Lebo wrote:
> Hi, Luc.
>
> I did. It was via https://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/210.
>
> BTW, the statement "an occurrence of a triangle between two 
> instantaneous event 
> <http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/ProvenanceModel.html#dfn-event> 
> vertical dotted lines represents that the event denoted by the left 
> line precedes the event denoted by the right line." clarifies an 
> ambiguity that I had when I submitted the issue.
>
>
> Regarding the "disorderly" part of the issue, I think I finally 
> deciphered your traversal method.
>
> Your rewrite has not addressed the source of my confusion.
>
> The figure is arranged as:
>
> a   b
> c   d
> e   f
> g   h
>
>
> The descriptions and definitions are arranged as:
>
> a
> c
> e
> g
> b
> d
> f
> g
> h
>
> The natural order of the alphabet is:
> a b c d e f g h
>
>
> As I was reading, I saw subfigure a and looked for the definition 
> (found it)
> Then I moved to subfigure b (b/c that is the second thing) and looked 
> for the definition, and _did not find it_. I only found "c" and 
> couldn't find "b" b/c it is in the middle of the list.
> You are traversing down, I am following the alphabet.
> I hope my rather verbose description helps convey my confusion, which 
> I think many will have.
>
> I think the easiest fix would be to reorder the descriptions and 
> definitions to (unless, you prefer an ordering based on the 
> characteristics of the constraints).
>
> a
> b
> c
> d
> e
> f
> g
> h
>
> Regards,
> Tim
>
>
>
>
>
> On Jan 17, 2012, at 8:01 AM, Luc Moreau wrote:
>
>> Tim,
>> I seem to recall you had commented on the order of subfigures in the 
>> temporal interpretation section.
>> I have updated captions, renamed some constraints, and reordered 
>> figures and constraint presentations.
>> Let me know what you think?
>> Cheers,
>> Luc
>>
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>> University of Southampton          fax:   +44 23 8059 2865
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>>
>>
>

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Professor Luc Moreau
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University of Southampton          fax:   +44 23 8059 2865
Southampton SO17 1BJ               email: l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk
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