- From: Curt Tilmes <Curt.Tilmes@nasa.gov>
- Date: Mon, 9 Apr 2012 08:22:31 -0400
- To: <public-prov-wg@w3.org>
On 04/01/2012 02:35 PM, Miles, Simon wrote:
> The primer is ready for review by the WG, ahead of the next release.
> http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/primer/Primer.html
It reads very nicely.
A few minor notes appended.
The examples section 3 really needs a diagram. I also think showing
the examples in PROV-N would be easier to read than PROV-O. I really
like the idea of including both PROV-O and PROV-N inline with
hide/show buttons rather than in the appendix.
>In constrast to the DM and PROV-O, the primer talks about "roles"
>rather than "qualified involvement" in general.
Roles is better for the primer.
>Do you think the document is accessible to all the major communities
>who would want to adopt PROV or, if not, where are the deficiencies?
Yes.
>Can the document be released as a next public working draft? If no,
>what are the blocking issues?
Yes.
Curt
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1. Introduction
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Worked examples that can be followed...
Remove "worked":
Examples that can be followed...
3.6 Derivation and Revision
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...using the same compilation activity as before.
The 'same' activity is jarring given our definition of activity. It
is a different activity.
perhaps just
...using another compilation activity.
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