Re: Review of ODRL Information Model ED

Hi!

> It would be great to have your feedback by then. What about sending me
> the scanned annotated paper?
> This would make faster the process.

Please find a scan of my review attached. I've a very very messy/ugly 
hand writing so I've added some of the remarks as comments directly to 
the pdf.

br, simon

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DDipl.-Ing. Simon Steyskal
Institute for Information Business, WU Vienna

www: http://www.steyskal.info/  twitter: @simonsteys

Am 2017-01-30 09:46, schrieb Serena Villata:
> Hi Simon, Renato,
> thanks for your review. I did it as well on paper, and I'll implement
> my changes tomorrow.
> It would be great to have your feedback by then. What about sending me
> the scanned annotated paper?
> This would make faster the process.
> 
> I cannot attend the call today due to another meeting, I apologize.
> 
> All the best,
> Serena
> 
> 
> 
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>> De: "Simon Steyskal" <simon.steyskal@wu.ac.at>
>> À: "W3C POE WG" <public-poe-wg@w3.org>
>> Envoyé: Dimanche 29 Janvier 2017 17:04:17
>> Objet: Review of ODRL Information Model ED
>> 
>> Hi!
>> 
>> Over the last week I've reviewed Section 3[1], including all of its
>> subsections, of our current Information Model ED (before the latest
>> changes to the constraint section).
>> I'll raise an issue on github for each individual
>> section/subsection/subsubsection, but since I have done my review on
>> paper it will take me some time to digitalize everything.
>> 
>> Unfortunately, I'm not sure if I'm able to make it to tomorrow's call 
>> on
>> time.. Based on my review, I would highly recommend to NOT publish the
>> IM ED in its current form (i.e., a -0.99 to any proposal for 
>> publishing
>> it).
>> 
>> br, simon
>> 
>> 
>> [1] http://w3c.github.io/poe/model/#infoModel
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>> DDipl.-Ing. Simon Steyskal
>> Institute for Information Business, WU Vienna
>> 
>> www: http://www.steyskal.info/  twitter: @simonsteys
>> 
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