- From: Naomi Yoshizawa <naomi@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 27 Feb 2018 15:24:51 +0000
- To: 上綱秀治 <ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp>
- Cc: public-poe-comments@w3.org, w3c-translators@w3.org
Received on Tuesday, 27 February 2018 15:25:28 UTC
Thank you again and again, Shuji! Naomi 2018年2月27日(火) 22:04 上綱秀治 <ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp>: > Dear Sir and Madam > > This is Shuji Kamitsuna@Japan. > > "Vocabulary & Expression 2.2" in Japanese is available now. > > > http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/internet/rights/REC-odrl-vocab-20180215.html > > Thank you for the great specification! > > I found some possible typos below. > > Sec. 4.1.2 > "a Party with Assigner is" might be "a Party with Assigner function". > > Sec. 4.5.3 > "realativeTemporalPosition" must be "relativeTemporalPosition". > > Sec. 5.1 > "The ODRL Ontology and can be" might be "The ODRL Ontology can be". > > Best Regards, > > -- > ******************* > KAMITSUNA, Shuji. > ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp > http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/ > > > > -- -- 吉澤直美 慶應義塾大学 W3C (World Wide Web Consortium) 〒252-0882 神奈川県藤沢市遠藤5322 Tel:03-3516-2504
Received on Tuesday, 27 February 2018 15:25:28 UTC