- From: Coralie Mercier <coralie@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 20 Feb 2018 14:52:32 +0100
- To: Renato Iannella <renato.iannella@monegraph.com>
- Cc: Naomi Yoshizawa <naomi@w3.org>, 上綱秀治 <ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp>, w3c-translators@w3.org, public-poe-comments@w3.org
Dear Renato, > On 20 Feb 2018, at 12:39 , Renato Iannella <renato.iannella@monegraph.com> wrote: > > Wow - Thanks Shuji - wonderful work! > > And yes, the typos you have found are errors (we will add to the errata for now). > > Naomi, how does this get added to the Translation link: https://www.w3.org/2003/03/Translations/byTechnology?technology=odrl-model > Unfortunately, it doesn’t. We lost the ability to update the W3C Translations database a few years back after a linux update that rendered that database obsolete. We have yet to figure out (this is on our list) how to make translations available other than via the w3c-translators mail archive. Kind regards, Coralie > Cheers - Renato > > >> On 20 Feb 2018, at 20:50, Naomi Yoshizawa <naomi@w3.org> wrote: >> >> Shuji++ >> Shuji++ >> Shuji++ >> >> Thank you always! >> >> Naomi >> >> -- >> Naomi Yoshizawa, W3C, Keio University >> 5322 Endo, Fujisawa, Kanagawa 252-0882 Japan >> +813-3516-2504 >> >> On Tue, Feb 20, 2018 at 7:45 PM, 上綱秀治 <ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp> wrote: >> Dear Sir and Madam >> >> This is Shuji Kamitsuna@Japan. >> >> "ODRL Information Model 2.2" in Japanese is available now. >> >> http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/internet/rights/REC-odrl-model-20180215.html >> >> Thank you for the great specification! >> >> I found some possible typos below. >> >> Sec. 2.2.1, 2nd. Example Use Case: >> "ttp://example.com/odrl:profile:03" must be "http://example.com/odrl:profile:03" - The initial "h" is missing. >> >> Sec. 2.2.2, Example Use Case: >> "can my indexed" might be "can be indexed". >> >> Sec. 2.3.1, in the explanation of "assignee": >> "the of Rule" might be "of the Rule". >> >> Sec. 2.5.3: >> "all of the the" must be "all of the" - "the" is doubled. >> >> Sec. 2.6.4, 2nd. Example Use Case: >> "assigner MUST now also compensate" - Could "assigner" be "assinee"? >> >> Best Regards, >> >> -- >> ******************* >> KAMITSUNA, Shuji. >> ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp >> http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/ >> >> >> >> > > Renato Iannella, Monegraph > Co-Chair, W3C Permissions & Obligations Expression (POE) Working Group > -- Coralie Mercier - W3C Marketing & Communications - https://www.w3.org mailto:coralie@w3.org +337 810 795 22 https://www.w3.org/People/CMercier/
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