Re: draft for tag issue

Does anyone mind the following ording in response to the tag issue -  and
is there a reason to delay in sending it?
Bare in mind Michael reformatted it some more.

We have  restructured and changed our explainer according to your
comments. (See Explainer-for-Personalization-Semantic
<https://github.com/w3c/personalization-semantics/wiki/Explainer-for-Personalization-Semantics>s.
)  We have tried to follow the TAG template but we felt it was
important to add a few sections to support understanding of our
approach.  We should clarify that we are not an API (though we might
support an API in the future) and that the main task was to
clarify/explain it.

Is the edited content more understandable?

Thanking you in advance

The personalization task force , Becky and Janina etc...