- From: Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org>
- Date: Sun, 26 Sep 2021 10:51:51 -0500
- To: Samuel Weiler <weiler@w3.org>
- Cc: public-payments-wg@w3.org
Hi Sam, I’ve made that editorial change in the charter. Thank you, Ian > On Sep 25, 2021, at 7:22 AM, Samuel Weiler <weiler@w3.org> wrote: > > As feedback on the draft charter: > > I suggest reordering the "out of scope" section to highlight the punch line. Here is a proposed rewrite, that puts the definitions after the punch line. Alternatively, you could define these terms elsewhere in the doc: > > "How digital payment schemes register and communicate with payment instruments. (Here, a "digital payment scheme" is a set of rules for the execution of payment transactions that are followed by adhering entities (payment service providers, processors, issuers, acquirers, payers and payees). A payment instrument is an account, token, or other means of fulfilling the payment provider’s role in a digital payment scheme. Some digital payment schemes make internal use of payment instruments from other payment schemes.)" -- Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org> https://www.w3.org/People/Jacobs/ Tel: +1 718 260 9447
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